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1. Barrow Song 
Author: cirdaneth
Last Updated: 01/30/08  Original Post: 01/28/08
Status: General  Rating: General  Chapters: 1  Word Count: 66
Era: 3rd Age - Ring War   Genre: Poetry  Completion: Complete
This poem uses a meter and rhyme scheme I've seen used by Tennyson. I don't know whether it has a name. Here an unhappy spirit longs for release.
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2. Return of light This is a HASA reviewed story.
Author: cirdaneth
Last Updated: 06/04/07  Original Post: 05/09/07
Status: Reviewed  Rating: General  Chapters: 1  Word Count: 319
Era: 4th Age   Genre: Poetry  Completion: Complete
Recently I wanted the challenge of writing something in the internal rhyme pattern of Tolkien's “Errantry”. I had no idea what to write about, but used Tolkien’s own method of letting something “come through” and this is what happened …
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Strangers in a Strange Land

Ianeth - 13 Sep 14 - 12:45 PM

Ch. 4: Salmar and Safety

Enjoying this, nice I idea and some imaginative touches.

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Unto the ending of the world

Nath - 12 Sep 14 - 11:45 PM

Ch. 40: Questions

Aiwendiel, thanks. I'm glad Arwen comes across well Grin

As for writing faster... I've told the Muse the floggings will stop when morale and writing speed improve Who, me?

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Unto the ending of the world

Aiwendiel - 10 Sep 14 - 4:56 PM

Ch. 40: Questions

Dear Nath, I just noticed another chapter of your great AU fic and enjoyed it thoroughly. You have Bilbo just right, and begrudgingly, you also have Gandalf spot on. I increasingly admire your Arwen and of course she is so much more flesh and blood and active than the original. Wonderful forshadowing, and perfect move to have the Grey Wanderer take to the roads before seeking the advice he thought he was looking for... once he found his real purpose in remaining on this shore. Excellent! Write faster, plz! 

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Hearts of fire souls of ice

Elleunamme Maltovia - 10 Sep 14 - 9:02 AM

General Comment

Great story, Nuredhel! I really like the job you did with character development, especially concerning Thranduil. It's smooth and realistic. You also did a good job of portraying the intrigue and duplicity of Thranduil's court. Some of the language didn't seem very elvish but otherwise I think you did a great job of depicting the elves. Glad you're writing a sequel!! Wink

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Duty

Elleunamme Maltovia - 10 Sep 14 - 2:13 AM

General Comment

I love love love the style and tone of this story! Smile I think you do a good job of portraying the "real" Eowyn the way she would have been if she had not changed and married Faramir. I like the dialoge and how you portray their emotions.

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