Henneth Annûn Story Archive

Oh this is priceless, kenaz.  Love it.

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Adaneth,

So glas that you have posted. I don't have too much time for review (I'm at work) but I wanted to let you know that I'm reading and waiting for your updates.

My, those dwarves are all incredible  business men, I would not like to bargain with them, I'm sure that I will lost.

Thank you

I very much enjoyed the first two chapters, are there 4 chapters?

Thank you for your patience as well as your comments, Elrûn--these latest as well as the ones back in December.  (Belated thanks to Tindome and Mffantasia for their kind words as well.)

I know you are probably wondering how Saelon and Dírmaen are doing, so I'll catch you up with them this Friday.

Cheers--

Adaneth

Adaneth,

What a pleasant surprise! I loved to read about the intricacies of dwarvish blood ties as well as the beautiful references to various precious stones. Thank you so much for this new chapter!

Elrûn

*Now* she realises what a twit she's been!  Love how you're writing this, even if I do want to give this particular Lothiriel a slap.

Just what I needed on a achey Friday morning.  Lovely - I'm rather glad Tevildo didn't go off with the stuck-up nanny and poor Cameron.  I do think that Aaron should do the cat-bathing duties, though.  No point in getting two people bitten....

Ooh, wonderful chapter again, the tension is really building up! And not just in terms of action ... 

What a lovely tender moment that was, when 'Leona' and Lothiriel have that embrace. Really well written. And then to add that sense of fear with the men following them ... phew. I think Lothiriel is finally beginning to realise that her plan will have serious consequences, not just by causing great distress to her family but also by putting herself in danger. 

Also love the way you describe the environment, animals etc - makes it very easy to imagine what is all looks like.

I'm eagerly awaiting the next chapter. 

Bluedot

The last hero is a very sweet story, thanks for writing it!