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The Time of Probing

Aiwendiel - 21 Aug 13 - 4:33 PM

Ch. 14: XIV

The final chapter (and those before it) is beautifully done. How well I have come to know the Elves of Rivendell through Sam's eyes, even characters I thought I couldn't learn anything new about -- such as Lord Elrond, and Glorfindel. I so enjoyed the glimpses of Legolas, and the hints about the other travelers converging on the secret valley. Of Arwen I have already written, and she is once again strong, involved and not just a lovely unreachable angel. A wonderful touch that Sam's room and headboard are reminiscent of Yavanna, how perfect for him. No wonder he dreams of Rosie! Well done, well done! 

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