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The Time of Probing

Aiwendiel - 12 Jul 13 - 5:42 PM

Ch. 1: I

What an intriguing idea, and well wrought. The focus from Sam's pov also places so much of the focus on Sam, as when Glorfindel so gently reassures him, or as the Elves of Rivendell arrive on the scene and they seem to sense Sam's terror and his devotion and treat him so very respectfully and kindly. I love your Gandalf -- his crotchedy humor and compassion come through well. And Sam's surrogate for his beloved Master would, of course, be the creature he has most recently befriended: Bill the Pony. Well done!

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