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A Concerto in Minor Chords

eliza61 - 09 Sep 13 - 11:05 AM

General Comment

Absolutely wonderful.  The writing has a very musical, moving "feeling" to it.  I also love the transition of feelings from Legolas, in the begining you get a glimpse of his and Aragorns deep affection and love for each other, then it moves onto Legolas's almost debilitating grief.

Even Gimili's part effectively attributes to the tone of the piece. 

This is going to be a keeper for me for sure!

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A Concerto in Minor Chords

cassie - 08 Dec 13 - 8:39 AM

Ch. 1: A Concerto in Minor Chords

A heartrending story beautifully written. It still makes me cry on the third reading!

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A Concerto in Minor Chords

eliza61 - 31 Jan 14 - 11:45 AM

Ch. 1: A Concerto in Minor Chords

Whew,  Jeez, what a story.  Poor Legolas.  So well written Tanis, pure emotion.  Even Gimili's emotions come through the page.

So many lines jump out, the image of Legolas terrified and in grief.

Well done Mellon nin, sorry it took so long for me to comment.

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