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Where The Grass Grows Green II: On Bended Knee

Aiwendiel - 14 Jul 13 - 1:05 PM

Ch. 10: The Remnant

Dear Ragnelle -- your story is indeed compelling. This chapter is very rich, detailed, nuanced in your portrayal of how the men of the North must now behave to survive and how they close in around their Chieftain. you show their pride and their strength -- and also that it is not limitless. The most chilling detail for me is that you leave the reader to imagine the cage Aragorn dread so clearly -- and I find that images infiltrate my nightmares. Worse than seeing it outright -- your intention, clearly. Well done!

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