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Imrahil's Daughters

Bluedot - 05 Nov 12 - 9:38 AM

Ch. 7: Chapter 6

Loved this chapter! You've really managed to evoke the harbour and the market so well I could almost imagine being there.  I also think it's great how you've got Eomer changing from a polite and charming King to a competitive bloke with just a few words from Gliwen/ Lothiriel, who then had to really work hard to stop him. You'd think with three brothers, she'd know how easy it is to hurt a man's pride ... It had me laughing out loud. It was an excellent comic exchange which I find very hard to get right (and I'm sure I'm not the only one) so well done.

I can't wait to see how Gliwen/ Lothiriel is going to get herself out of the mess she's creating!

Bluedot Smile

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