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A Mortal Life

ziggy - 08 Apr 12 - 1:21 AM

Ch. 20: The One Who Walks In Dreams

I am so glad you have posted this, Aiwendiel. This is such a wonderful and rich story. You explore the nature of Olorin/ Gandalf in beautiful detail, exploring his emotions and powers in a way that is utterly credible and 'real' but never touched in canon. The relationships developed over time are gorgeously written and well worth reading - a reward to the reader is the lovely moment where Mithrandir does not quite understand the dance and then does - but I wont spoil it for new readers. I LOVE this chapter when he returns.

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A Mortal Life

Larner - 01 Oct 13 - 8:58 PM

Ch. 20: The One Who Walks In Dreams

Well, he made it, even if Rubeo didn't.  Welcome home, Gandalf.

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