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Megan - 13 Jul 11 - 5:52 PM

Ch. 1: Torn

I love stories about elves returning to Aman, and this one didn't disappoint. I really loved how you managed to convey the estrangement Glorfindel felt for both his family and the land so well. And the idea of a new Gondolin, and how Glorfindel would be expected to shift his loyalties by some was really inspired. Great story! I enjoyed it a lot.

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Elena Tiriel - 18 Jul 11 - 6:31 AM

Ch. 1: Torn

Ah, Aeärwen, this is beautiful!

Glorfindel is one of my favorite characters *big fangurly sigh*... and you do him justice in this tale.

What a cold reception from his own children... not even a hug! And not caring to hear about his time in Middle-earth....

Oh, and the thought that the Gondolithrim would re-create the city, complete with its imposed isolation -- what short-sighted folly!

I was so glad that Erestor and Ecthelion were there to soothe the pain his family inflicted upon him... and that the Peredhil family clearly considered their family reunion woefully incomplete until his arrival....

Very nicely done!

- Barbara

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