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maeglin - 31 Jul 11 - 12:37 AM

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I've always been 'torn' as to whether it was wise for the Noldorin Exiles to return to Aman at all, and this story vividly illustrates why it might not have been.  G is quite lucky, in a way, to have such good friends! -- (much as E was; his 'happy ending', as related in 'Expecting Nothing', is touching and beautiful).

Turgon might not have been so lucky, and I sympathize with him (though not with G's wife and children).  Artalinde as you write it might well have been the best of imperfect options for those who were not 'torn' :)

I'm very intrigued by this story and hope there will be a second chapter.  For example, what of G's parents?  One hopes that they, at least, will be more welcoming..

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