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Lintheminstrel - 19 Oct 11 - 5:25 PM

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I really like the stream-of-consciousness style you've used, it shows up Maedhros' madness very effectively.  It seems kind of foreshadowing for what happens with him and the Silmaril at the end. 

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Adonnen Estenniel - 16 Nov 11 - 5:49 AM

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Thank you for your kind comments, Lin! This was an experimental piece at best.

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