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Thanwen - 18 Jan 11 - 8:25 AM

Ch. 2: Prophesy Part II

Some people really should get a good thrashing for their stupidity if they weren't already injured! And the very same man rebukes his squire for "heroics"! Men!That makes me mad!

Ah well, at least we know he'll have the fool's luck and will survive, but as in RL his wife is going to pay for it!

Don't let yourself be bluffed by an old biddy, shaking her head at the young ones antics!

I truely enjoyed the action, the convincing facts on warfare and the insight into the psyche of the Rohirrim in the second chapter as well as the logical way you develop the story lines and just hope, the next one will bring up Lothíriel to treat him.

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