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Thanwen - 09 Jan 11 - 4:11 AM

Ch. 1: Prophesy Part I

You really know how to build up some tension! What a dramatic entrance!

Though you leave me with a quite prominent feeling of uneasiness: "years of despair", "choice - but at what cost"... that with the mentioning of what the Valar will charge for the boon to save a king, and last but not least Lothíriel's order:"Hulde, you will say nothing.", do not bode well.

And it is upright mean for an action-addict like me to be left with such a cliff hanger, closing the chapter at the very start of a charge! That makes me mad!

Please, do update soon, just to soothe my nerves!

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