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A Powerful Absence

ziggy - 09 Dec 10 - 2:28 PM

Ch. 1: Chapter One

I have finally found the time to read this beautifully crafted work. The lightness of touch is perfect, and deft, a story telling at a slight distance which reflects the distance I think, Elladan has now, that sort of unreality of losing his brother.

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A Powerful Absence

curiouswombat - 09 Dec 10 - 2:54 PM

Ch. 1: Chapter One

Thank you Ziggy.  That sense of slight distance, of detachment and unreality, was exactly what I was trying to achieve - I am so glad that it came over that way  to you.

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