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One Last Thing

Ellynn - 11 Oct 10 - 7:56 AM

Ch. 1: One Last Thing

I have to confess that I never really thought how the Three Ringbearers had felt after the destruction of the One Ring. It didn't cross my mind that their Rings might become a burden, but now that you describe it - yes, it seems quite plausible.

I like your description of Elrond and Celebrian and their meeting. Lovely story, so well written! :)

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One Last Thing

Azalais - 12 Oct 10 - 3:19 AM

Ch. 1: One Last Thing

Oh, this is lovely; lyrical and so vivid. It's certainly a plausible interpretation of how the Rings might affect their bearers after the destruction of the One - and I can quite believe Galadriel being unable/unwilling to give hers up yet (is it wholly about self-punishment, one wonders?)

I loved your Gandalf too; it's easy sometimes to forget that the grumpy old wizard is a Power as far beyond the understanding of even the Highest of the Elves as the Elves' power is incomprehensible to Mortals.

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One Last Thing

maeglin - 15 Oct 10 - 6:09 PM

Ch. 1: One Last Thing

Perhaps Galadriel and Celebrimbor know something that Elrond and Olorin don't! 

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