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Cuinwen - 27 Oct 10 - 8:26 PM
Ch. 35: Chapter 35
I like the way you're pulling your sub-plots back into the story. Your pacing of subplots has been very effective so far.
Your handling of the central mystery is also very nice, letting it slowly take shape over many chapters, doling out clues but not giving so much away I can solve it quite yet.
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