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The Wizard and the Ranger
Ailiniel - 25 Jun 10 - 1:26 PM
Ch. 1: The Wizard and the Ranger
If only it was a little bit longer!
And if only "the Sword of Elendil "was a little longer!
So,we should expect other chapters on the early days in Thengel's court or the adventures in Rohan?
Anyway,congratulations for the amazing work!
The Wizard and the Ranger
curiouswombat - 27 Jun 10 - 6:56 AM
Ch. 1: The Wizard and the Ranger
That seems a perfect first meeting, and wonderfully told.
The Wizard and the Ranger
Adonnen Estenniel - 01 Apr 11 - 11:52 PM
Ch. 1: The Wizard and the Ranger
I thought you managed to maintain a very consistent tone throughout this piece. The writing was light-hearted and cheerful, yet you kept the context of the scene in mind and hinted a darker aspects of the characters' pasts. The tone and mood were perfect for just such a scene.
The plotline itself was interesting and well-handled. I thought the softer presentation of these two characters set them off to advantage. In this piece you created an effective and useful piece of writing that told a good tale.
Nicely done.
