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The Wizard and the Ranger

obsidianj - 17 Feb 11 - 6:55 PM

General Comment

It might not be a weighty meeting, but it sounds true to Gandalf and Aragorn. I can imagine them meeting like this.

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The Wizard and the Ranger

Ailiniel - 25 Jun 10 - 1:26 PM

Ch. 1: The Wizard and the Ranger

If only it was a little bit longer!

And if only "the Sword of Elendil "was a little longer!

So,we should expect other chapters on the early days in Thengel's court or the adventures in Rohan?

Anyway,congratulations for the amazing work!

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The Wizard and the Ranger

curiouswombat - 27 Jun 10 - 6:56 AM

Ch. 1: The Wizard and the Ranger

That seems a perfect first meeting, and wonderfully told.

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The Wizard and the Ranger

Adonnen Estenniel - 01 Apr 11 - 11:52 PM

Ch. 1: The Wizard and the Ranger

I thought you managed to maintain a very consistent tone throughout this piece. The writing was light-hearted and cheerful, yet you kept the context of the scene in mind and hinted a darker aspects of the characters' pasts. The tone and mood were perfect for just such a scene.

The plotline itself was interesting and well-handled. I thought the softer presentation of these two characters set them off to advantage. In this piece you created an effective and useful piece of writing that told a good tale.

Nicely done.

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