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Invictus
Casso - 16 Dec 10 - 2:05 AM
Hmmm,
I feel a good Aragorn story coming on. Even if he is not the main character. It'll do me.
Continue........
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maeglin - 19 Dec 10 - 9:39 PM
What a tale you're weaving here! Aragorn and Gildor are dead-on perfect - and such an unexpected (and intriguing) backstory for Haldir!
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Taraisilwén - 24 Jan 11 - 7:39 AM
I'm hooked. Great beginning of a well written story with both the twins and Aragorn :)
Very interesting plot. It's wonderful to read about elves with the whole specter of thoughts and emotions - instead of always being wise and calm. And they still feel... "tolkienish"(in lack of a better word... :P).
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Lintheminstrel - 03 Jan 12 - 8:56 AM
I've been following this tale since it began, in other places where it's been posted. The level of tension is incredible, as are the trillion layers of Haldir. He's not quite broken, not quite sane, very much in danger and very much a danger. Wonderful story, as long as you keep writing it, I'll be reading it!
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