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I Shall Not Call The Sunbeam Bright

Angmar and Elfhild - 13 May 10 - 10:54 PM

General Comment

A truly awesome story told from Sauron's perspective. Thank you, JDE.

Angmar

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I Shall Not Call The Sunbeam Bright

odalisq - 08 May 10 - 1:16 AM

Ch. 1: Chapter One

Speechless. How can anyone write like this? The most shocking, daring, heartbreaking opening chapter. I feel sorry for Mairon the most. 

odalisque

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I Shall Not Call The Sunbeam Bright

odalisq - 08 May 10 - 1:39 AM

Ch. 2: Chapter Two

Cries! JDE, this is seriously one of your masterpieces. Elerrina, Maedhros, Mairon are all living through this story. 

So many quotable lines! One can hoodwink the Gods with fool's gold. She is a courageous person to be talking to Mairon like that.

The Mairon-Maedhros part on the rocks moved me to speechlessness again. You make art of the Pieta type with words in this chapter.

"Mairon, Mairon," he whispered, "are we not the unluckiest among Eru's creations, you and I?"

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I Shall Not Call The Sunbeam Bright

odalisq - 08 May 10 - 1:44 AM

Ch. 3: Chapter Three

A gripping end to a gripping story. Sauron like this isn't my usual cup of tea but your plot had me from the first line. Thanks!

Odalisque.

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