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The Sons of Thunder

Aiwendiel - 14 Jan 12 - 8:07 PM

Ch. 42: Aícanaro

Oh. My. God. What wonderful imagery - staggering, tempestuous, like a tsunami of wild energy! Loved (of course) the struggle between the two Maia who have (of course) known one another for all time... And what a scene between the twins -- perfect! PERFECT!

Re; your question at the end -- oh, come on, cut to the chase already! Enough suffering for all their multiple lifetimes put together! 

Thanks for this treat for Saturday night!

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curiouswombat - 15 Jan 12 - 6:40 AM

Ch. 42: Aícanaro

Wow!  What a fantastic, action packed, emotion packed, chapter.  As for your question at the end - hmm - perhaps a bit of the suffering - just to keep it going a little longer and make the happy ending (please, please, there has to be a happy ending, yes?) even more appreciated!

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AndreaH - 15 Jan 12 - 1:12 PM

Ch. 42: Aícanaro

Ooh, Frodo and Sam finally got there. It was lovely, and to me unexpected, how Aícanaro helped at just the right moment... I wondered briefly if someone else might not also finish with one less finger.

Now, can Aragorn help Legolas? Or Olórin, or what about one of the twins? Please, please Smile. As to your question, well I guess either option is fine, more story is good, but cutting to the chase is good too. As long as the chase is good?

thanks, 

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elftart - 15 Jan 12 - 10:28 PM

Ch. 42: Aícanaro

OMG i can't wait for the next chapter...this chapter was sooo stressful. well done. I have to go have a lie down now and wait..

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Azalais - 18 Feb 12 - 6:01 AM

Ch. 42: Aícanaro

Wow - dramatic, dramatic stuff! Really visually arresting descriptions of battle; I thought the imagery of Legolas seeing and seeming to fight in slow motion, due to the effects of the poison, was particularly effective.

Personally, I would say you've spent a good few chapters on the Black Gate, and it would be good to move on. Not necessarily straight to Cormallen - because how they all *got* to Cormallen is a gap in the canon and filling that might be interesting - but beyond the battle, certainly.  And poor old Legolas, I've almost forgotten how it feels to have him hale and well - I love your dynamic, funny, energetic Wood-elf and I'd like him back!

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