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The Sons of Thunder

Tanis - 12 Sep 10 - 2:09 PM

Ch. 20: Chapter 20: THe Gift of Men

Spoiler Alert - Don't read further if you haven't read this chapter-----

How deliciously ironic that Gandalf chooses one or both of the twins to carry out this mission, particularly when Elladan has come to the full-on recognition that Legolas is what he wants after all.  And now, it appears, he will have to make a choice between his brother or the one he loves.  Delecious indeed.  And heart wrenching. 

I cannot see through those low=scudding clouds of Mordor how this can have a happy ending, but me thinks there are still many chapters to go and you have such a wonderfully twisted mind I'm still Holding My Breath that my hopes will come true!

Yummy chapter, Ziggy.  And I already read it this morning over at ff.net.  Smile

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eliza61 - 13 Sep 10 - 9:07 AM

Ch. 20: Chapter 20: THe Gift of Men

Sweet Lord Ziggy.  Talk about guys with issues!!  I agree with Tanis, how in the world are these three going to be able to live with themselves let alone each other.

Very fine writing.  Elrohir's anger is unbelievable, almost to the point of madness.  Middle earth is going to need some serious pyschiatric help when this is over. LOL.

Now, I hope you update soon because you left us with an evil cliffie, at this point I would not be surprised if both Elrohir and legolas took a leap off a cliff.

Well done, mellon nin

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curiouswombat - 13 Sep 10 - 10:40 AM

Ch. 20: Chapter 20: THe Gift of Men

Oh My Goodness.  Ziggy  you know how to give us triple angst with a side order of extra strong angst...

And how will Gandalf find this meshing with his oh-so-clever plan?  Which could he trust to do the deed?  His is a stupid plan, anyway....Frown

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Imber - 14 Sep 10 - 12:57 PM

Ch. 20: Chapter 20: THe Gift of Men

I thought we'd had enough angst already and you just pile on more.I can barely cope with the intensity of it all. And they've got a war to fight at the same time as all this.

Please don't leave us waiting too long for more.

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Azalais - 09 Dec 10 - 5:49 AM

Ch. 20: Chapter 20: THe Gift of Men

Now at last Elladan's got to the heart of it. And I wonder whether, now the dire secret is out, Elrohir will be able to be healed - and whether, given the way he equates Legolas and Celebrian in his mind, Gandalf's plan is going to offer some opportunity for him to atone?

Poor, poor Legolas, and poor Elladan. But also poor Elrohir for the appalling situation he finds himself in. If you do manage to come out with any sort of happy ending that is convincing, from here,  I will heave a huge sigh of relief and take my virtual hat off to you!

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