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Yesterday, I Burnt The Sky

Gladhaniel - 23 Aug 10 - 4:50 PM

Ch. 2: Grasslands

I really like this. :)

"They [...] always looked at his ears instead of his eyes." I find this part particularily interesting, as well as the end of your drabble.

I find your concept overall truly nice. You keep it short, but pretty poignant.

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