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The Abduction of Éomer, King of Rohan

Bluedot - 10 Feb 10 - 11:57 AM

Ch. 4: Chapter 4

I'm really loving this story, and the interaction between Leona and Lothiriel is fascinating. You can see there are equal amounts of attraction and dislike - but I can guess which one will win in the end (thank goodness!).

 I laughed when she drew on her royal position and ordered him about - serves him right really! Yet she did notice the smell of 'wet man'. Let's hope it's not as bad as wet dog!

Thanks for updating so swiftly - it's helped me through a rough day at work. 


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The Abduction of Éomer, King of Rohan

Angaloth - 10 Feb 10 - 9:22 PM

Ch. 4: Chapter 4

I totally didn't see that coming...at all. Excellent.

This chapter also really made me like Lothiriel's character (and Eomer's too). Lothiriel doesn't seem like the type of person who is easily cowed, but I wonder if she would be as arguementative if she knew of his higher rank; she also doesn't seem to have noticed the fact that he addresses her by her name, which seems a bit familiar to me... even if he is a king. But that seems like such an "Eomer" thing to do, especially with the way you usually characterize him. : )

Their banter is fantastic, by the way. I love Lothiriel's logic: "Well, you shouldn't go to sleep in my brother's tent then, should you." Serves him right then, in my opinion.

Best line(s) of all: "I can guarantee you that the King of Rohan won't be interested in marrying you after this escapade. You may have my word on that." --if only she knew!

I can't wait to see how this unfolds.

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The Abduction of Éomer, King of Rohan

Freyalyn - 11 Feb 10 - 2:45 AM

Ch. 4: Chapter 4

Oops!  I wonder how long it'll be before Leona confesses!  What is Lothiriel going to do when she realises that she has completely ruined any reputation she has?   Great fun.

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