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Refraction
ziggy - 01 Nov 09 - 2:51 AM
I really dont understand why you havent had loads of wonderful comments on this-perhaps you have had private comments. This is a really great story and thoroughly grown-up enjoyable
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Olorimë - 20 May 10 - 4:34 PM
A very witty, very masculine take on Slash erotica. I particularly liked the "Why haven't I done this before" comment. It was a very refreshing read. 
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ziggy - 01 Nov 09 - 2:19 AM
I really just had to pause and tell you how much I am enjoying the story. It is original and lively, has a beautifully balanced narrative tone, between youthful naivety and diplomatic cunning one would expect from any Thranduillion. Your descriptions are superb. The tension you weave is exciting and I have to get onto the next chapter now!
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