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Raksha The Demon - 05 Nov 09 - 1:45 PM

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Thanx for commenting, Wombat - I doubt that Fourth Age Gondorian fathers received sensitivity training, LOL.  Eowyn would have instantly prized the newborn; and definitely  was not amused by her husband's initial blatherings...

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curiouswombat - 05 Nov 09 - 11:21 AM

Ch. 1: Expectations

Totally believable - and so hard for Faramir not to  put his foot in it when she is feeling very fragile, and very, very attached to this small red scrap of humanity.  A lovely little piece.

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Larner - 16 Sep 10 - 7:12 PM

Ch. 1: Expectations

Nice to read this once again.  Love the image of the child soothed by his growing awareness of her as an individual, and one worth the treasuring.

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