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Freyalyn - 04 Aug 09 - 1:50 AM

Ch. 1: Anadûnai

Interesting how so many fics recently are less than starry-eyed about the valar.  I think you've done a brilliant job of imagining the joy and heartbreak between these two brothers, and your descriptions of early Numenorean society and architecture are well-reasoned and written.

Nice to see a 'young' Elrond, carefully kept in his place by elves older and wiser, and also how he perceives his half-elveness.  A half-elven colony/society would have been an interesting concept to explore, if any had been allowed to.

Thought-provoking.  And poignant.  Thank you.

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maeglin - 08 Aug 09 - 7:40 AM

Ch. 1: Anadûnai

Darth, that was awesome!  Just about perfect...

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