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King of Shadowed Halls

Adonnen Estenniel - 06 Dec 09 - 7:08 PM

General Comment

This was great. The backstory you put into Lalaithiel's parents was well-done and informative. Thranduil's love for his wife is evident, and I liked their interaction. For me, the most touching part was when Lalaithiel told her mother about her husband's failure to give her a child. The emotion was poignant. Nicely done!

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