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Elladaniel

maeglin - 31 May 09 - 9:38 AM

General Comment

This is a beautiful story.  I don't find Elrohir's behavior puzzling at all (and besides, Galadriel explains it to Ivoreth).  Elrohir has had a hard life, has lost a great deal and is about to lose much more - such circumstances can twist the best of us, if only temporarily.  After all, Elves aren't perfect!  This story shows their imperfections very elegantly.  

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bear423 - 19 Jul 09 - 3:59 PM

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this story was great!!!!!!!!!Wink

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tclaybon - 30 Jul 09 - 10:36 PM

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I like this story so far, and look forward to more of it... 

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curiouswombat - 02 May 09 - 2:09 PM

Ch. 1: Actions and Reactions

How lovely to find that you have started to post this follow-up to Light Fingers, which I enjoyed so much.

Poor Ivoreth and, in some ways, poor Elrohir too - slow anger is not a comfortable emotion.

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Jay of Lasgalen - 04 May 09 - 1:02 PM

Ch. 1: Actions and Reactions

I'm glad to see you continuing this story, but really don't understand Elrohir's behaviour.  He's not just angry, he's cruel to Ivoreth. 

Yes, she broke his trust - but she's a child, and didn't understand.  He knows what he's doing and the effect it's having.  I cannot equate this cold, deliberate cruelty with one of the sons of Elrond.

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ErraticPerfectionist - 23 May 09 - 3:24 PM

Ch. 1: Actions and Reactions

You're going to update this soon, yes? I've been re-reading this chapter every week when I go to check for the next chapter! (forgive me for not leaving a comment before now!)

Thank you for continuing to write about Ivoreth, Raini and Elladan! I can't wait to read what happens next!

I was bit dismayed to see Elrohir acting so cold towards Ivoreth, so I hope he forgives her soon.

Please write again quickly! I'll keep checking each week until then.

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Gwaelinn - 08 Aug 09 - 7:31 PM

Ch. 1: Actions and Reactions

Yes!! I was so hoping there would be a sequel!  And so far, this is as gripping as Light
fingers.  I feel for poor Ivoreth...know that feeling--and Elrohir, very beleavable and to be honest, it is nice to have him in the 'not so nice hot temper' for a change.  Somehow, it always seems writers set Elrohir as the gentle, wise one and Elladan as the impetuous, tempermental one!keep it coming! 

Off to read more...

~Gwaelinn

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ErraticPerfectionist - 30 May 09 - 2:42 PM

Ch. 2: In The Golden Wood

Elrohir's so cruel!! He must have a deep character reason for being like that...but I don't know what it is, can't guess and I'm desperate to know! He can't honestly be like that normally...

Please don't let Ivoreth run away or die. She's been through enough. Poor Ivoreth...

Is it too soon to hope this might be updated again this week? I'll keep checking!

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Tempewytch - 20 Jul 11 - 9:45 AM

Ch. 7: Complications

I have always loved the way Ivoreth passes the message on - and hoo boy am I glad to find where my favourite authors have headed to!

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curiouswombat - 26 Jul 09 - 2:24 AM

Ch. 11: A Little Help

Ah - so now we see that Ivoreth's life with her Da was not necessarily the picture of perfect parenting...

It is good to see that she is beginning to develop a relationship of trust with Elrohir and how happy she is to realise that Celebriel wishes to be her Nana.

She is recovering well, psychologically, from the horrific amounts of trauma her life has held for so long, but not instantly - which I think is right.

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