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Deeper than Breathing

curiouswombat - 29 Dec 08 - 3:58 AM

Ch. 4: Grima

Another well written and fascinating chapter.

The scenes with Grima were so poignant - like Legolas I felt sad that he had
had to be killed rather than saved.  Which is pretty good going, as he is
not a character for whom I had previously had any sympathy.

I am now curious about Gandalf...

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