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Hand to Hand

mffantasia - 07 Mar 11 - 9:39 AM

Ch. 31: Wait to Watch the Water Clear

The end of this chapter let me with a huge smile in my face. Those two had so many misunderstandings, that it is a wear sight to have them talking, courting and showing their love. No a young love, but one mature and strong that, I hope, will help them in bad times. They are both going to this marriage or hand fasting, with open wide eyes and knowing each other fairly good. I really hope a good end for them. I like Dirmaen telling her that he will try to work with the dwarves for her sake, and her thoughts that he was a very honest man, when he was trying not to gossip about their lords, and he is very fair in his comments. I believe that they are well matched, but I recognize that I have a soft spot for your Dirmaen.


I wish to know the Chieftain's reaction to their union, and his family and the other Rangers. I'm becoming such a frivolous reader.  So, I'll be more serious,  let me tell you that you are such a great writer, your stories really captive me and I always want more and more, please, keep writing


So glad that your active, that your muse has not abandon you… yet?

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Hand to Hand

Adaneth - 09 Mar 11 - 6:03 AM

Ch. 31: Wait to Watch the Water Clear

Well, Mffantasia, if you have a soft spot for Dírmaen, I hope you like the new chapter.

As for the Chieftain's reaction, and his family's, well, there's another story I need to tell before we get to that.  But the Muse has been as industrious as a Dwarf lately, so things are coming along nicely.

Thank you for your comments!


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