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Hand to Hand

DKP - 27 Feb 09 - 5:30 PM

Ch. 9: Unbidden Guests

Ai Elbereth! It's shaping up into the worst of my anguished imaginings! Where are the rest? When is the cavalry coming??

Grim, with excellent setup and pacing, and the character reactions to the unfolding events are simply superb and believable.

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mffantasia - 28 Feb 09 - 9:35 PM

Ch. 9: Unbidden Guests

I'm terrified, this is bad, but the worst is coming, because we don't know where is the rest of the outlaws,Where are those Rangers?! Dirmaen is going to feel so guilty... This is a good chapter and I don't need to tell you that I can't wait for the next one. Thanks.

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Elrûn - 01 Mar 09 - 11:21 PM

Ch. 9: Unbidden Guests

Adaneth,

this is terrible, and terribly well-written. What more could I possibly say? I just hope the worst will not befall Saelon and her people.

Elrûn

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Adaneth - 02 Mar 09 - 6:54 AM

Ch. 9: Unbidden Guests

Thank you for your comments.  Some of your questions will be answered in the next chapter . . . .  I will promise no more.

Ever--

Adaneth

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