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In Empty Lands

Freyalyn - 07 May 10 - 12:36 PM

Ch. 17: "Trust in Their Friendship"

Nice little gap filler, an extra layer of it seen through Elrond's eyes, and I very distinctly heard ominous music as we shifted to Boromir's viewpoint.  I love your hobbits (as I've said before...) and the interaction, even shown like this at a distance and with no dialogue, is lovely.

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Aiwendiel - 11 May 10 - 8:53 PM

Ch. 17: "Trust in Their Friendship"

Oh, this is beautiful. It is especially touching, seeing it through Elrond's eyes, and Boromir's lonely ones. Makes me wish to hear the thoughts of Arwen, as well. I suspect she has some interesting feelings. Thanks! Aiwendiel

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