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In Empty Lands

Freyalyn - 13 Oct 09 - 1:34 AM

Ch. 15: The Prince of Mirkwood

Lovely little story, as I would expect.  Any reason why you've made Bill a skewbald?  'Fain' not 'fane' in your usage I think.

Poor Boromir, he really was scuppered from the start, wasn't he? Even in Rivendell the ring's picked him out as the weak point.

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Larner - 22 Oct 09 - 9:23 AM

Ch. 15: The Prince of Mirkwood

I chose brown and white in response to the movies, I think, and thanks so for the corrections.  Now and then homonyms manage to catch me in spite of myself, I find; and I can recite off the color schemes of pomeranians far mre easily than those of horses or ponies, I suspect!  Corrections have been made.

As for Boromir--I doubt he needed much of the Ring's influence to imagine himself the hero of Gondor.  This has been in him from the beginning, I fear.

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