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A Treasure Retrieved

Freyalyn - 09 May 08 - 1:52 AM

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Urgh, ick!

I like the finger foreshadowing-not. 

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Larner - 10 May 08 - 1:36 PM

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Ah, yes--indeed a foreshadowing of sorts--a foreshadowing of an future that is now definitely changed! 

Thanks for the feedback, even if it is "Ick!"  Sometimes I do like writing different sorts of stories.

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Peregrin_Ionad - 10 May 08 - 2:20 PM

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Thanks for the feedback, even if it is "Ick!" - well Bonnie...that is exactly what my feedback was!

Lily

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Nath - 12 May 08 - 1:56 AM

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Well... of course another ick... Nicely done!

And so wonderfully thoughtful of Gollum to save something for the Precious Grin

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Larner - 16 May 08 - 7:18 AM

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Thanks, PI and Nath!  Heh!

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Ygrain - 20 Oct 08 - 3:39 AM

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I like these might-have-beens, and this one has really left a fingerprint :-)

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Larner - 20 Oct 08 - 10:01 PM

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Thank you, Ygrain.  Yes, one can put one's finger on it!  Heh!  Am glad Dwim made her request this year.

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