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A Treasure Retrieved
Freyalyn - 09 May 08 - 1:52 AM
Urgh, ick!
I like the finger foreshadowing-not.
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Larner - 10 May 08 - 1:36 PM
Ah, yes--indeed a foreshadowing of sorts--a foreshadowing of an future that is now definitely changed!
Thanks for the feedback, even if it is "Ick!" Sometimes I do like writing different sorts of stories.
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Peregrin_Ionad - 10 May 08 - 2:20 PM
Thanks for the feedback, even if it is "Ick!" - well Bonnie...that is exactly what my feedback was!
Lily
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Nath - 12 May 08 - 1:56 AM
Well... of course another ick... Nicely done!
And so wonderfully thoughtful of Gollum to save something for the Precious 
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Larner - 16 May 08 - 7:18 AM
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Ygrain - 20 Oct 08 - 3:39 AM
I like these might-have-beens, and this one has really left a fingerprint :-)
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Larner - 20 Oct 08 - 10:01 PM
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