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Agape4Gondor - 19 May 08 - 1:02 PM
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Kitt Otter - 20 May 08 - 10:52 AM
Thanks, Agape! To say that I was pleasanly surprised over seeing a comment in my inbox would be underexaggerating. : )
I fretted over that phrase-thing more than any other sentence in the story. I am glad it rings well. And I am so glad you enjoyed!
-Kitt
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Elena Tiriel - 26 Feb 09 - 6:41 AM
Oh, this is very tense, Kitt Otter!
I like how professionally Legolas approaches his sentinal duty, clearly experienced at it. I shivered at Too much thought finds the guard dead... just the sort of arcane saying one hears among consummate professionals.
(Actually, I was imagining myself on guard duty... busily composing drabbles in my mind as the enemies sneak up.... so not a warrior!)
Anyway, a well-written vignette, conveying the (tense!) moment vividly. Nicely done!
- Barbara
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Kitt Otter - 26 Feb 09 - 3:17 PM
Hello Barbara! I was pleasantly surprised to find your comments – it had been a while since I posted it. Heh, but composing drabbles is still more than I would have done. After five minutes I'd have been snoring… Thanks for reading! 
-Kitt
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