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Hidden Watcher

Agape4Gondor - 19 May 08 - 1:02 PM

Ch. 1: Hidden Watcher

Hi, Kitt – What a neat tale to find today! 'Too much thought finds the guard dead.' I love this phrase/proverb/thing! And once HE heard, the tension became extreme. Well written tale. I pondered, before I read, as to who it could be…. And was satisfied that I was right. I do so love a mystery. Congrats on a great moment! *shivers*

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Hidden Watcher

Kitt Otter - 20 May 08 - 10:52 AM

Ch. 1: Hidden Watcher

Thanks, Agape! To say that I was pleasanly surprised over seeing a comment in my inbox would be underexaggerating. : )

I fretted over that phrase-thing more than any other sentence in the story. I am glad it rings well. And I am so glad you enjoyed!

-Kitt

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Hidden Watcher

Elena Tiriel - 26 Feb 09 - 6:41 AM

Ch. 1: Hidden Watcher

Oh, this is very tense, Kitt Otter!

I like how professionally Legolas approaches his sentinal duty, clearly experienced at it. I shivered at Too much thought finds the guard dead... just the sort of arcane saying one hears among consummate professionals.

(Actually, I was imagining myself on guard duty... busily composing drabbles in my mind as the enemies sneak up.... so not a warrior!)

Anyway, a well-written vignette, conveying the (tense!) moment vividly. Nicely done!

- Barbara

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Hidden Watcher

Kitt Otter - 26 Feb 09 - 3:17 PM

Ch. 1: Hidden Watcher

Hello Barbara! I was pleasantly surprised to find your comments – it had been a while since I posted it. Heh, but composing drabbles is still more than I would have done. After five minutes I'd have been snoring… Thanks for reading! Grin

-Kitt

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