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From Afar

Rithralindë - 10 Apr 08 - 5:24 PM

Ch. 16: Revelation

Oooh! Lovely chapter, this one transitioned beautifully!

At first I thought the jewelers' shop was going to fleece him or something, but that completely set up a happy-good feeling, thinking that really things were going to go well. The closing was wonderful, I couldn't think of a better way to leave us readers in anticipation.

Keep writing good lady! Hope that the next chapter is even more exciting.

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