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From Afar
lubartow - 02 Apr 08 - 12:49 PM
I read Chapter 15 and just wanted to send you encouragement to keep going! The story is going well. The romance is believable (assuming that Boromir was really interested in a woman's chastity, which is not something that Tolkien ever discussed) - in fact his emotions are very realistic.
Just a suggestion (not really a crtiticism) - the chage mid-way between the characters having lunch around noon and then going to bed that night was a bit abrupt - I had to re-read to realize that some time had elapsed. Just a sentence or two could fix this.
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