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From Afar

lubartow - 14 Feb 08 - 11:59 AM

Ch. 4: Mercy

A good chapter, but the story seems to be taking an ominous turn - how is she going to get Boromir out of there?  Morgan was quite right when she said she should have gone to another hospital but the basic problem is the same.

The basic premise, that the 21st century C.E. would completely disorient any strangers from milennia earlier, is believable.

(I have to admit that I usually don't like stories set in the modern USA rather than "authentic" ones from Middle Earth, but your writing is so good that this tale has "grown" on me.)

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From Afar

Peregrin_Ionad - 21 Feb 08 - 9:09 AM

Ch. 4: Mercy

Hey! great so far!

"I fear your Honda is dying,"  *snigger*

I wouldn't normally read things with Boromir in...but I'm rather enjoying it!

Pip Scuba

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