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Old Man Willow
Marta - 17 Jan 08 - 8:11 PM
Oh, nice! This is a wonderful addition to the [x]-takes-the-Ring genre. I never would have imagine this character as tempted, but his canonical character actually makes this very possible. While he's not outright evil, he definitely has his darker side.
Nice work.
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docmon - 20 Jan 08 - 5:51 PM
That was ....coooool! 
Terrific and unique interpretation. Haven't come across something like this yet!
Nice insinuations for the end. Well done!
docmon
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Linaewen - 14 Apr 08 - 5:33 PM
I told others about how amazingly chilling and excellent this tale was, and then forgot to tell you.
Sorry I am late with my praise for your story!
I thought this was one of the most frightening tales I have ever read -- it is simply so plausible! The possibility that is suggested at the end is definitely a logical conclusion, but so very chilling to contemplate. Well done! I shall never look at Old Man Willow the same again!
Linaewen
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Nath - 15 Apr 08 - 7:56 PM
It's really nice to see that one's ah...more 'unusual' bunnies are so well received.Go to Old Man Willow
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ratcreature - 15 Feb 11 - 5:29 PM
What a cool and unusual scenario. Yet still plausible enough.
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AFriedman - 22 Nov 07 - 11:50 AM
This is a very interesting take on LoTR and I like its non-canonical spirit.
Tolkien's view of nature is that it has a certain neutrality--despite its perceived benevolence or malevolence, it is relatively immune to the lure of power. Tom Bombadil, for example, cannot be affected by the ring and only seeks to remain within his small domain. Shelob as well may seek alliance with Gollum, but she herself does not lust after the Ring or world domination in the Sauron sense--she simply wants to stay in her hole, have children and get enough to eat. Although organisms are in an unsteady balance with one another that more or less keeps them from destroying other life forms, I do imagine they would take over the world if they could. I like that in your AU story, the tree can and would take over middle-earth. Trees and plants that are overrunning the world is a possibility Tolkien does not seem to consider, but in theory it can be as bad as anyone else overrunning the world.
Well done! I'd like to see you writing about any alliances that are re-drawn because of Old Man Willow's threat (light and dark creatures working together to fight the trees after Willow decides he wants his revenge on both??!!)
AFriedman
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Nath - 23 Nov 07 - 4:16 AM
at Julie.
AFriedman, thanks for the detailed comment. When I first had this idea, I thought of using Treebeard, but then I realised that Old Man Willow did have the perfect opportunity to grab the Ring, and is already a malevolent, or at least self-oriented, character.
I can see some possibilities for looking at this further from different POVs, even if this is essentially a one-shot. But who knows what the muse will inspire?
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Raksha The Demon - 19 Jan 08 - 11:20 PM
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Agape4Gondor - 31 Mar 08 - 12:55 PM
Whoa, Nath! This was indeed spine-tingling chilly! Linaewen and Marta suggested I read it - and well worth the read - though I'm glad it is daylight and there are no such beings near me, for the nonce.
Excellent extrapolation going outside of Tolkien's boundaries.
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Elena Tiriel - 31 Mar 08 - 9:25 PM
Not the kelp! Noooooooo!
*shivers*
This gives me the creeps, Nath!
- Barbara
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Nath - 02 Apr 08 - 8:26 AM
Agape4Gondor, Elena Tiriel, thanks for your comments on my twisted little tale. I'm a lot more wary now of the willow tree that I pass by on my way to work every day 
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Larner - 02 Apr 08 - 8:59 AM
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Stefania - 15 Apr 08 - 12:58 PM
What a terrific concept, Nath, which you carried through beautifully right to the chilling yet ironic conclusion. I'm somewhat of a tree-hugger myself, so I almost chuckled at Old Man Willow's exploits until that ol' ring-induced meglomania set in
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I'm not set up to post comments yet on Henneth Annun. I really wanted you to see my thumbs up, thus this quick comment.
- Stefania
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