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Tide of Destiny - Part One: Choices

Arcadia - 22 Mar 09 - 11:14 AM

Ch. 8: Chapter 8

I had been wondering when something like this would happen between Eomer and Bergit, considering the nature of Edwick's injury. It seemed so inevitable, but part of me wants Eomer to push her away. Excellent characterization with Bergit, though. Sort of a lonely desperation and it's actually sad to watch her turn to Eomer, after the trials she and Edwick went through, but it's very real. Well done.

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