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A Game of Ninepins

Freyalyn - 02 Nov 07 - 4:11 AM

Ch. 1: A Game of Ninepins

Ooh, spooky.  It's broad daylight on the 2nd of November here, but I've still had a shiver down my back.

Accurate, beautifully written, and imaginative all at once.

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A Game of Ninepins

Larner - 27 Nov 07 - 2:31 AM

Ch. 1: A Game of Ninepins

Thanks again for the feedback, Freyalyn.  Am glad I managed to convey a feeling of eeriness, although I hope it might also have given a smile or two.

Most of this series of tales I've done have been intentionally humorous, but for Halloween I felt this was more appropriate to the season.

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A Game of Ninepins

Cuinwen - 09 Sep 10 - 8:35 PM

Ch. 1: A Game of Ninepins

A very nice interweaving.  I didn't get it until the very end.

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