Comments for: Lothiriel's Journal
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whitewave - 26 Apr 08 - 10:11 AM
Ch. 1: Prologue
I have read your stories and I like the "ambience" everytime. It's so easy to get immersed in the world you paint.
For this chapter, I particularly liked the smart dialogue between Eothain and Eomer. I liked how you fleshed out Eomer's character - who I felt was so under exposed in the books.
My favorite scene here was the part where Eomer mistakes Lothiriel for another woman and how he reacts to it.
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