Henneth Annûn Story Archive

I found the conversation between Eothain and Eomer very amusing, esp. the former's snide references to the King's possible preference for Lothiriel's brothers. 

Also laughed out loud when Erchirion caught them spying.   

Hi Whitewave,

Very pleased to receive your comment - but - *goes red with embarrassment*- it made me realize I have not put all the proper bits back since the story went for review nearly a year ago! 

I have read your stories and I like the "ambience" everytime.  It's so easy to get immersed in the world you paint. 

For this chapter, I particularly liked the smart dialogue between Eothain and Eomer.  I liked how you fleshed out Eomer's character - who I felt was so under exposed in the books.

My favorite scene here was the part where Eomer mistakes Lothiriel for another woman and how he reacts to it. 

I thought the scene between Lothiriel and Amrothos was sweet.  When I first read this it was easy for me to imagine the emotions that she must feel and her excitement in seeing the man she is engaged to.  Totally romantic, this.

Enjoyed Belechtor's work very much--if only for laughs and not for sound advise! May I be so bold as to request that you publish a few "interesting" chapters?  

 Aunt Ivriniel is a very interesting character.

As for Belecthor – what a good idea to have some of his work published. But we will have to speak nicely to Lialathuveril, as he is her character - I just borrow him occasionaly!

Stalk... Sap...

You nearly cost me a keyboard. 

Enjoyed Aunt Ivriniel's instruction very much.  Laughed out loud on how she described the activity she so abhors.  Esp. what she thinks of while she's doing it. 

A very entertaining chapter. 

I agree, Nath. They seemed to have to wait such a time for anything to happen in those days. Look how long poor Aragorn had to wait! LBJ

Hi Nath,

I am sure he does. And Eothain can always be relied on to come up with just the right words! LBJ

I've never read satisfactory Eomer-Lothiriel pairings before, yours would be the first I really liked. All versions are so romantic!