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The Most Beautiful

DKP - 06 Mar 07 - 10:45 PM

General Comment

This is lovely, Meril. The constant call of Melian's glorious "other world" reminded me of the elves' sea-longing, and the reasons holding her to Doriath were beautiful and apt. I especially loved your last two paragraphs.

Your story hints just enough for me to think ahead and better understand her eventual abandonment of her one-time home. Very nicely done!


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The Most Beautiful

Meril - 07 Mar 07 - 3:09 PM

General Comment

Thanks, Denise! 

This just popped into my head at midnight, after I read the Character of the Month challenge here, and it made me wonder how Melian felt living between two worlds.  

Smile  Comments are so lovely.  Thanks! 


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The Most Beautiful

IVIaedhros - 08 Feb 08 - 11:05 AM

Ch. 1: The Most Beautiful

Very nice...the extra effort with the watercolor(?) is appreciated as well.

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