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Divided

Rithralindë - 18 Dec 07 - 4:25 PM

General Comment

I thought this was wonderfully done, really!
It is rare to find such depth in a little conversation piece, but this did the job well. Especially delving into Aragorn's thoughts, about the effect of a human against a human in fighting. That was sadly beautiful, but truthful and connected on many levels.

It reminds me of Sam's reflections, near the end of the chapter, 'Of Herbs and Stewed Rabbit'. When Faramir's men shoot down one of the Southrons' on the Oliphants. Except, this I will have to admit, is much more deep.

Once again, beautiful job I really enjoy this!Smile

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Divided

Gandalfs apprentice - 01 Mar 07 - 8:45 AM

Ch. 1: Divided

This is so well done, using character and conversation to make an important point, hinting at so much experience and history in both Aragorn and Boromir. Good job, Pen.

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Divided

Linda Hoyland - 01 Mar 07 - 1:32 PM

Ch. 1: Divided

Well written and thought provoking.You capture the characters well.

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