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When the Stars Smile

MerryK - 02 Feb 07 - 12:15 PM

Ch. 1: When the Stars Smile

I have always harbored the secret theory--which I intend to prove with experiments on Tyelkormo--that blondness is somehow associated with flagrant ignorance of anything that is not likewise golden and shiny. My cousin and the lovely Amarië are not helping to disprove this theory.

Laugh out loud I loved this story, Dawn. It has just enough realism and just enough romantic sweetness to make it perfect. Taryinde and Carnistir are just right for each other!

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When the Stars Smile

Freyalyn - 09 Feb 07 - 3:27 AM

Ch. 1: When the Stars Smile

Please tell me you're going to write about the experiments?.....

 Love this again, as all of your stuff.  I enjoyed imagining an elf in an unbecoming purple dress with ruffles. (Reminds me of Secret Diaries....)

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When the Stars Smile

Marta - 18 May 07 - 2:27 PM

Ch. 1: When the Stars Smile

This was really great, Dawn. I'm not an expert with this time period, but even without knowing all of the canon it was an amazingly fun story all on its own.  

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When the Stars Smile

DKP - 03 Jul 07 - 11:27 PM

Ch. 1: When the Stars Smile

What a wonderfully, wickedly funny story. Carnistir's PoV is delightful, his observations both perverse and true to life. Loved the "visions" of Findaráto and Amarië and Carnistir's thoughts about blonds in particular, but everything had just the right balance between being absurd, and touching my heart. Nicely done!

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When the Stars Smile

ziggy - 13 Mar 13 - 7:21 PM

Ch. 1: When the Stars Smile

As you promised, humourous but with a dash of awkward misery that is transformed into delight. I have such a fondness for Carnistir

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