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When the Stars Smile
erunyauve - 24 Jul 07 - 11:20 AM
>>Of course, all of this was overshadowed by the hair-sail, which--when I tried to brush it--began to more resemble a frizzy mushroom, so I resorted to my usual tactic of tying it back with a strip of hide and having done with it.
::g:: I read this during my lunch and had my cube-mates wondering what was so funny. Having watched little Caranthir all year in 'Another Man's Cage', I quite enjoyed seeing how you perceived him as an older but not yet grown elf.
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MerryK - 02 Feb 07 - 12:15 PM
I have always harbored the secret theory--which I intend to prove with experiments on Tyelkormo--that blondness is somehow associated with flagrant ignorance of anything that is not likewise golden and shiny. My cousin and the lovely Amarië are not helping to disprove this theory.
I loved this story, Dawn. It has just enough realism and just enough romantic sweetness to make it perfect. Taryinde and Carnistir are just right for each other!
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Freyalyn - 09 Feb 07 - 3:27 AM
Please tell me you're going to write about the experiments?.....
Love this again, as all of your stuff. I enjoyed imagining an elf in an unbecoming purple dress with ruffles. (Reminds me of Secret Diaries....)
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Marta - 18 May 07 - 2:27 PM
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DKP - 03 Jul 07 - 11:27 PM
What a wonderfully, wickedly funny story. Carnistir's PoV is delightful, his observations both perverse and true to life. Loved the "visions" of Findaráto and Amarië and Carnistir's thoughts about blonds in particular, but everything had just the right balance between being absurd, and touching my heart. Nicely done!
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ziggy - 13 Mar 13 - 7:21 PM
As you promised, humourous but with a dash of awkward misery that is transformed into delight. I have such a fondness for Carnistir
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