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Until The Axle Break

Crowdaughter - 29 Jan 07 - 12:44 PM

Ch. 1: Until the Axle Break

Jael,

what a lovely, erotical piece is this, and at the same time laced with sadness and loss. Bittersweet and moving. And the poem you chose to go along with this is to the point an adds depth to the story, as always. Great work, and very well done!

(Has to go and look for some tissues, now).

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Until The Axle Break

Jael - 29 Jan 07 - 5:08 PM

Ch. 1: Until the Axle Break

what a lovely, erotical piece is this, and at the same time laced with sadness and loss. Bittersweet and moving. And the poem you chose to go along with this is to the point an adds depth to the story, as always. Great work, and very well done!

(Has to go and look for some tissues, now).

Thank you so much for my first comment on this story here!  Not too purple?

This is the precursor to a longer Thranduilomance, currently in progress and soon to be seen here.  Obviously, The Ent and the Entwife is one of his favorite songs.

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Until The Axle Break

mistry89 - 24 Feb 07 - 10:18 PM

Ch. 1: Until the Axle Break

I like stories that explore the character of Thranduil's wife. We know he must have had one (and Legolas, a mother), and I enjoy seeing the differing ways the two things we can surmise about her - that she existed, and that she is (apparently) no longer in ME - are written. I am also a Thranduil-fan, and like to see stories where he is not portrayed as a greedy despot. This is a heart-warming if sad, little glimpse.

Thank you!

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